Group crit

  When I showed my second design of my posters to my classmates, some of them suggested me to make my designs even simpler as it still looks a bit complex. They proposed to change the typeface to Helvetica as the typeface of my second design was "Snell Roundhand" so the curve of the texts looks complex. They also recommended me to make the lines in same thickness because I just traced those lines from a paper so the thickness may be different. They said I can use the pen tool in Illustrator and draw those lines again so that the thickness can be the same.