First group crit

  In the first group crit, people said my work is too much focus on the park, they suggested me try to focus on one theme for example cycling or the main users of Hyde Park. And then they said if I want to design for cyclist, I can make a wayfinding system for cyclists and help them to get to the place for example library or pub. To do this, they said I can use lines with symbols and numbers for times it takes to travel or use different thing to make different map for cyclists, visitors or skaters, etc. For example use different colours to represent different places. They said I should make my pictograms look simpler so that people can read or understand easier.